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The Cloud Sweeper by WhitePhoenix7 The Cloud Sweeper by WhitePhoenix7
AAAAAAAARNGH! Those wings are just so kökkö... Lets say shitty in English... -.-' And I feel like crying otherwise also. Why? BECAUSE I'M DOING SOME BLOODY RANDOM WORKS WHILE I SHOULD BE WORKING ON SOMETHING MORE CLEVER... Pardon me, I'm a bit tired ^^;
And do not ask about the title...

It was originally a small doodle I did while I was bored, and yesterday when some relatives of ours did come to visit, I hide myself in front of the computer and ended up doing something after that sketch. You see the result. It's some random phoenix messing around with clouds. And how high in the sky that fellow is, I have no idea.
After all I myself think that the colors of this pic turned out nicely and I tested some new things with the shadings. In some areas they look quite messy but I'm happy with them otherwise. Something else it is with the lineart...

PS CS 3, lots of songs from 80's and 90's, time probably around 7hours...

Art (c) me
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pesire Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
oh i like!
the clouds looks really great when the wing comes trough it, nice!
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009
Thank you! ^^ I'm glad to hear the clouds looks great in those parts, because I didn't have much idea how to do those so it was really just "investigation" :p
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jodipheonix Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009   General Artist
I like the wings , think the body looks a little off but heh ^^; I tried
drawing my own phoenix and the whole lot turned out crap - especially the body :lmao:
so I don't have much room to critisize on this ..

anyway , I like it - it gives me a familiar feeling :heart:
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
Heh, the body may look like that :D I'm not used to draw birds in perspectives like this, but I just had to try :p
And I don't mind being critisized if the critic has some point in it - in future I more likely will try to avoid doing same kind of mistakes I once did.

But thank you! I'm really glad you like it :)
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jodipheonix Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009   General Artist
you're welcome :)

and yes I do really like it

again , don't listen to my crit as
I lately can't draw for shyte :lmao:
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
Nah, I listen to your crits and I try to make more correct looking bodies for birds :D
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jodipheonix Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009   General Artist
:)
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Skudde Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009   General Artist
Ojoi. -^~^- Sö;pö. Melko omaperäinen pään asento ja nää kaikki koristesulat sen mukana. Ja kieltämättä kököt siivet. ^^' Liian suorat. Kun nyt ees käsisulat vähän kääntyis ylöspäin. =P No, väritys on kivan pehmeen näköstä eikä linetkään oo kovin perinteiset.

Eipä tästä juuri muuta sanottavaa saa. x3
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
No niin! Tulihan se edes jostain muustakin suunnasta että siivet on kököt! :D *Yay* Ne on tosissaan liian suorat ja jäykän näköiset.
Linet ei perinteiset? Onko niissä sitä samaa luonnotonta pehmeyttä kuin Suicca-kuvassa? :p

Kiidus kommentista!
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GoldenTigerDragon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Student Digital Artist
vau tosi hienoo jälkee! :D mä niin tykkään sun töistä! :aww: teet hienoja lintuja :lol: onko ne PhotoShopilla tehtyjä? =)
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
Kiitoksia jälleen kerran! ^^ Harvemmin mä suoraan Photoshopilla piirrän noita lintuja (koska siivet on tuskaa piirtää piirtopöydällä :roll: ), mutta esim tämäkin oli pikkuruinen piirros paperilla, otin siitä valokuvan ja piirsin ääriviivat uudelleen Photarilla. Normaalisti piirrän ääriviivat vaan paperille ja skannaan koneelle ja väritän sitten. Toivottavasti tuostakin nyt tajusi jotain :p
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princess-phoenix Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
It looks alright to me! :) The colors are gorgeous!

I also hide on the computer when relatives visit =P I usually have nothing interesting to talk to them about.
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
Well, I'm glad to hear that :) Thank you!

Yeah, I know that if I would have gone to talk to them I would have probably received this same old question-flood I hear everywhere... "How are you?", "How's it going at school?", "You're ending high school soon, right? Where are you going to go next fall?" (<- And after that would come the usual question, "What on earth is a medianom?"...). So, I gladly did just sit in front of the computer :p
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laludia Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
The wings are correct in anatomy. I don't see why you complain.:D The design is beautiful. It's so beautiful that I have the temptation to draw it myself.:D
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
The another wing is longer than the other! -.-' *Sigh* Maybe I'm complaining without a proper reason? :p
I'm glad you like the desing ^^ You can of course draw it if you want to, if you don't go around saying the desing is yours ;)

Thank you for the comment! :hug:
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laludia Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
That is because the bird is slightly tilted, so it is natural in perspective that the wing is longer than the other
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
Hmm, yeah, good point :D
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Cashda Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ei sen siivet minusta mitenkään kuse. O-o se on oikein kaunis yksilö, pyrstö näyttää minun silmääni hieman hassulta, mutta sen sijaan työ on oikein antoisa. Tykkään tosta tunnelmasta, vähän tollai.. FREEFALLLINNGGGHHH, mutta kuitenkin tollai .. ööh.. liitävä? Niin just.. o_o

Ihanan värinen <3
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
Kyllä ne siivet vaan kusee. Ei siis kirjaimellisesti mutta häikkää niissä on...
Pyrstössä on vähän jotain ongelmaa, nuo pitkät sulat taipuu jotenkin hassusti :p En keksi itsekään mitään luonnollista selitystä moiselle.
Onko se sellainen "FREEFALLIIIINGGHH leija"? Mulle tuli koko ajan mieleen leija kun tein tätä kuvatusta :D

Ja kiitoksia kovasti ^^
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Cashda Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Ziigaa mua ku mä lentelen, Mä oon niin leija!" ... eehh.. xDD

NHmn. Minusta ne siivet on hienot, lintujen siivet on muutenkin tosi hankalia ,kun niistä ei ota selkoa saatika muutenkaan, tosi hankala piirtää o_o
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
Juuuh, jotenkin niin :D

Mä en itse ole edelleenkään turhan tyytyväinen noihin siipiin... Hankalia ne kyllä tuppaa välistä olemaan :p
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CrazyCrocuta Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Oooh, the colors are gorgeous. :aww: I always loved the way you drew wings, they always come out so nicely. ^^ The tail feathers look unique for a phoenix. I love how the head turned out, he looks so calm.
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
Thank you ^^ I'm just not too happy with those wings, the other one is slightly longer than the other and it looked even more worse in one point... And fixing it was anything else than easy -.-'
Nice you like the way the head turned out. You don't think it looks like it would be warped in an unnatural way?

And thanks for the fav also :)
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CrazyCrocuta Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I don't think so. It reminds me the way a bird will twist it's head to look at something better. :) It looks perfectly natural. And you're welcome. ^^
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WhitePhoenix7 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
It really looks like that? Good, I'm glad to hear it ^^ I was afraid it would look too unnatural somehow...
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